@Bribelle thats allright! your story has great potentials and i cant wait for more!
ps, i nearly cried when i read the part with her nearly getting shoot! XD
@DesertGurl11 Wow! That's awesome haha I didn't know that chapter would make people almost cry! I almost did as I was writing it, but that's because the characters are pretty much real in my head....and I really get into what I'm writing haha. I have the next chapter (six) up, and I'm working on chapter seven! Keep your eyes peeled! :) Thanks :)
@Bribelle thats allright! your story has great potentials and i cant wait for more!
ps, i nearly cried when i read the part with her nearly getting shoot! XD