Help me out by reading my story? tell me the good, the bad and the ugly? hahaha
Here is a small extract for you to ponder over.
Story: NAMELESS, Chapter 2-Nameless:
The entire time she had been talking, Li Li had managed to keep her voice level and calm; she was quite pleased with herself. Before she had even realised it he was in-front of her, looking down into her eyes, was he really that much taller than her? She hadn't realised how short she really was, especially without her shoes, she was looking up into his eyes, almost mesmerised.
"Someone like me? What do you mean by that Li, hmm? Someone like me? What makes you think I haven't meant everything I have said so far?" He moved his hand; he cupped his hand around her jaw, saying each word directly into her ear. He felt her shudder under his touch and smiled a little to himself, that wasn't fear or repulsion she felt and he knew it, could tell by the pounding of her pulse at the tender nape of her neck, he felt her whisper, although he could hear her as clearly as if she were shouting.
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