AijinRaven

       I need feedback on how my writing makes readers feel and think, it is really helpful. It tells me what my writing style is conveying. I need the tension moments to feel like tenstion, I need the mysteries to be good enough to make the readers actually ask themselves questions to try and figure it out. 
          	       I need my soft hints to fall into place when readers hit a few chapters ahead and something from a previous chapter makes sense now. I welcome all feedback, from calling out my grammar issues to typos. Feel free to even comment here if readers want too XD

AijinRaven

       I need feedback on how my writing makes readers feel and think, it is really helpful. It tells me what my writing style is conveying. I need the tension moments to feel like tenstion, I need the mysteries to be good enough to make the readers actually ask themselves questions to try and figure it out. 
                 I need my soft hints to fall into place when readers hit a few chapters ahead and something from a previous chapter makes sense now. I welcome all feedback, from calling out my grammar issues to typos. Feel free to even comment here if readers want too XD

AijinRaven

All revision work is officially done for Wings and Webs: Journey. The only thing that may need to be done is correcting typos and misspelled words. Nearly 6 years after I started writing it and I still manage to miss typos lol

AijinRaven

@AijinRaven thank youuuu, I very much am excited for readers to see my books. I enjoyed writing and working on them so much
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Matzed

@AijinRaven always be enthusiastic for youu
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AijinRaven

Posted a few new stories, did some updates for everything too. Still have writer's block on Wings and Webs 2 but the other projects have gone well. Can't wait to hear what readers think. Happy reading to all and enjoy the adventures along the way.