Ainslin

@ML_Brooks Thanks! And actually it would really help to give little pointers an things like that. I haven't written very much an am not that good, so things like that help. 

ML_Brooks

Hey really like your book so far and can't wait for an update. I just wanted to say to maybe make the cabin part less confusing with maybe some more details (sorry I'm really not trying to be a critic) but yea love the story :)