Hi there,

I have just discovered this wonderful community. I am currently writing a novella, aimed at young adults and I would really like some honest feedback. 

Please leave any comments, I would like to hear them all, the positive and criticisms. 


Thanks,

Aiston
  • UK
  • JoinedDecember 5, 2012

Stories by Aiston Holmes
  • 2 Published Stories
The Scarlet Trail by AistonHolmes
The Scarlet Trail
England, 1862. A young woman is brutally slain in a Kent woodland. The next evening, twenty miles away, the s...
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Vampire World Takeover by AistonHolmes
Vampire World Takeover
Vampires are everywhere. From the shadows, they have shaped the course of human history, hunting us in secret...