Hi! i have been reading your stories since August 2020. I have been a huge admirer of your work and I totally understand your desire to take a break from all of it. However, today I'm here to share my thoughts on a few things. I don't know how you will perceive it. But still I want to let it out.
Your stories are comforting and worth a read. Your writing is precise and beautiful. But I feel like in some of your works the relationship is sudden and the chemistry feels forced. The male lead instantly falls in love with the fmc and chases after her until she agrees. Something about the dynamic seems lacking to me. Maybe depth or maybe a genuine connection. Usually the praises and admiration is based upon looks which seems a bit superficial to me.
Excuse me if anything I said bothered you on a personal level. I'm merely sharing my opinion about your books. I have no intentions to weaken your spirit as a writer.
You seem to be in a writer block. Which makes sense.
I hope you get out of it someday because despite my criticism, I thoroughly enjoy your work and see the potential.
Maybe you can write a story filled with obsession and possessiveness ofcourse( that's the best part) but with a bit of distinction. The main characters can connect on a deeper level and share a good chemistry.
That's my suggestion.
I hope you have a good day, author. Wish you all the best.
