Akea13

@iwoulddatemyipod IKR! I like candy. Hehe. And sure! I read Shutters & WIndows and I'll look at The Sky's Lament (nice title btw) right now. =) 
          Welcome to Wattpad! xD

...Woah... It looks like...gummy bears except in sour patch form... :O Where can you buy this stuff?!? :) I like your profile background. uhmm... I'm new here, and I was wondering if you could critique me on my poems 'The Sky's Lament' and 'Shutters & Windows'?

@SophieRDF  Really? You liked that one? Wow. I  completely gave up on it. I don't even have a title for it. But if you think it's one of my BEST, I'd better post it! Thanks, Sophie. =)

Are you going to post that poem you wrote about writing a poem, that ends with
          "My poem
          Is secret."? I think that's one of your best poems.

@Akea13 
          
          You deserve it! ;) And if I could recommend a few works I think you'll enjoy, here they are. 
          
          Depressing/Tragedy (Collaboration--It's longer than my usual poems, but it's the one with most poetic meaning.) I would love your opinion on this one!
          
          Twisted Vernacular
          http://www.wattpad.com/1650616-twisted-vernacular-a-short-story-prose
          
          Word Play (Mean Cooks--A Prose)
          http://www.wattpad.com/1819092-meaningful-gibberish-poetry
          If you're an animal lover...
          http://www.wattpad.com/1739117-a-z-our-inner-animals (2 poems so far)
          
          Different styles of poetry
          http://www.wattpad.com/1731248-xcix-poem-challenge
          
          Thanks a bunch! 
          
          
          

@Intrepid_Imaginer Thank you so much! Actually, I was planning on commenting on a few more, I simply didn't have time. I'll do it now!
          I understand! And thanks so much for taking the time! And for fanning! Wow! So many thank yous! ;)

@Akea13 
          
          Hello! *Fanned. Thanks so much for the feedback and if you could comment on some of my newer poems, I would appreciate it. ^_^ Sorry I haven't gotten around to your poems. I've been getting reading requests here and there! Will try my best to finish reading by the end of today. 

@SophieRDF Sand?! Are you comparing my skin to sand?! Haha, okay then. But yeah, it's my back...
          Cool! I like the pictures you have from Italy, though... Did you ever win that competition?

Oh, I didn't realize it was on your back! I thought that was sand. 
          
          Yeah, I think mine's the dirt near Lago Di Garda.
          
          Though I might change it now. I've got some great photos of migrating bats.
          

@SophieRDF Thank you! My friend did it while I was lying on the beach reading a book. She kept scolding me when I turned the pages, because my back rippled and it messed up her work!
          Yours is from Italia, right? It's really pretty...