Denisa588853
I like your yautja story and the way you write is amazing. I would love to see how it continues, or even read another story from you if you ever decide to write one!
ChenZhen3
I love your predator books so much (sorry if my grammar wrong, I'm not really good at English)
Akierae
@ChenZhen3 oh my gosh.. really? It's so refreshing to know this and it really makes me want to continue this story. I put this book on hiatus because i feel insecure of my own grammars so don't worry,mate.. we are in the same situation here. I'm not really good at English too because english isn't my main language.
Lunnaflame1
There are alot of mistakes in your preditor book and alot of words are being used at the wrong time.
Akierae
@NikkiWillis5 thank you for pointing it out. I am well aware of that matter but i'll try my best to improve!