Hay.., huh, can you give me review for my story? :) .... I am new to write story.(why i am asking you? .. well i saw your comments in 3 fantasy stories lol..) i felt like you can help me
@mlclmfrsr No thank you for writing it. While I am partially confused about what each of the masters are, it is a very interesting story. Are the masters mages of some sort?