I believe you should read from Chapter 1 to Chapter 3 before you judge it. Chapter 0 isn't really part of it, it's just explaining where the event is happening, and how it used to be. Also, constructive criticism will be appreciated!!! (Especially on Chapter 3!)
https://www.wattpad.com/story/384954804
@Akira_6606 Reading chapter 1, I was like, nice writing, but where is the story heading to? but at the end, I was like, Oh shit, so like, it's like, centuries in the PAST?! LIKE OMG
I believe you should read from Chapter 1 to Chapter 3 before you judge it. Chapter 0 isn't really part of it, it's just explaining where the event is happening, and how it used to be. Also, constructive criticism will be appreciated!!! (Especially on Chapter 3!)
https://www.wattpad.com/story/384954804
@Akira_6606 Reading chapter 1, I was like, nice writing, but where is the story heading to? but at the end, I was like, Oh shit, so like, it's like, centuries in the PAST?! LIKE OMG