Akira_6606

I believe you should read from Chapter 1 to Chapter 3 before you judge it. Chapter 0 isn't really part of it, it's just explaining where the event is happening, and how it used to be. Also, constructive criticism will be appreciated!!! (Especially on Chapter 3!)
          	
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Akira_6606

@ManaBender Haha, most people fail to realise it.
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ManaBender

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@Akira_6606 Reading chapter 1, I was like, nice writing, but where is the story heading to? but at the end, I was like, Oh shit, so like, it's like, centuries in the PAST?! LIKE OMG
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Akira_6606

I believe you should read from Chapter 1 to Chapter 3 before you judge it. Chapter 0 isn't really part of it, it's just explaining where the event is happening, and how it used to be. Also, constructive criticism will be appreciated!!! (Especially on Chapter 3!)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/384954804

Akira_6606

@ManaBender Haha, most people fail to realise it.
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ManaBender

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@Akira_6606 Reading chapter 1, I was like, nice writing, but where is the story heading to? but at the end, I was like, Oh shit, so like, it's like, centuries in the PAST?! LIKE OMG
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