@AkornDefalko whatever you decide to do, you have a loyal follower, if you want to rewrite go for it! you’re a talented writer so whatever you decide to do with the book, i’m sure we will all enjoy. our perceptions on situations are ever changing, your book has some deep situations so it’s fair that you want to emphasise the importance of how death can affect someone. you’ve been able to write deep and imperfect characters with so much thought to and depth to them which highlights how everyone feels and act differently in the real world. your work is raw and beautiful. you lost someone close (?) to you and it doesn’t matter whether they were related to you or not, even if they weren’t important to you, it is someone you knew. you are allowed to feel grief, with that being said: take all the time you need, heal, pray, do whatever helps YOU and put yourself first.
