Hello Aksmu_hbc
I came across Unique Teenagers and spent some quiet time reading through it, and I wanted to reach out in a simple, honest way.
There was something about the line “closeness is not the same as truth” that stayed with me long after I read it. It felt like the heart of everything happening in the story. The way you built that contrast between how everyone sees them and what they are actually carrying inside felt very real. I also found Alejandra’s strength and Priscilla’s silence especially interesting, because they say so much without needing to say everything directly.
What stood out to me most is how the story slowly shifts. It begins with warmth, friendship, and those “sweet memories,” but you can already feel something underneath it all, something waiting to surface. That quiet tension is something not every writer manages well, but you handled it naturally.
At the same time, I had a small thought while reading. The story has a strong emotional core and a clear voice, but it feels like it might not be reaching as many people as it could yet. Not because anything is missing in the writing, but maybe because the depth of it is something readers usually discover by chance instead of being guided into it.
I just wanted to share this with you because your work genuinely feels like something that deserves to be seen and understood more deeply.
Also, I was curious, do you have any of your work published on Amazon or Goodreads ?
