Akuresi

Hey guys,I've  always been told I write excellent short stories so I'm trying my luck at writing a novel. It would be awesome if u could check it  out. When  you do, please let me know what you think..should I continue or nah?? But please, be as gentle as possible with your criticism...remember this is a test run, lol. Thank you!
          	I just published "Prologue" of my story "Unbreak My Heart". https://my.w.tt/UiNb/sim5QaYCdK

Akuresi

Hey guys,I've  always been told I write excellent short stories so I'm trying my luck at writing a novel. It would be awesome if u could check it  out. When  you do, please let me know what you think..should I continue or nah?? But please, be as gentle as possible with your criticism...remember this is a test run, lol. Thank you!
          I just published "Prologue" of my story "Unbreak My Heart". https://my.w.tt/UiNb/sim5QaYCdK

JessaMartell

@Akuresi Thank you for following me! I really appreciate it and hope you enjoy my work ❤ 
          Jessa xx 

Akuresi

@JessaMartell you're welcome,and I did. Could you please check out my story...It's the only one on my profile lol.  I've always been told I write great short narratives  but it's  my first time writing an actual story. Please tell me what you think and  if u have tips on how I could improve  my writing I'm willing to listen! Thank you in advance!
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