@Al0nleygirllol this is pretty random, but I was wondering if you could review my first page of my VERY first story? Its not published on wattpad yet, but I would really like someone to review it and give me some constructive criticism to make it better.
At my friends house and lowkey I don’t wanna be here smh. We’ve been smoking weed and I feel sick but I’m going on a second date tomorrow so I’m looking forward to that. Heck, this is gonna be announced to everyone cos lol