@Al23ko8
I have some sort of idea for another story.
Do you know how DMC is basically a story about an half demon?
Should I do the same but as an OC that is half angel or somehow gets abilities of an angel (as in archangel or like abramich angels) to fighting demons and evil and ect ect...
Yoo just wanted to ask what do you think of the Spider-Man/Ben 10 story so far? Any opinions?
@Fireburnns22 one being with the return of the galactic enforcers, Flash with the Techadon armor, Fistirck and the megawatts, return of Limax wanting revenge on Ben, screwball, Return of Zs'skayr, and khyber
I enjoyed your Loonatics unleashed books and I'm looking forward to future chapters
Yoo for a brief standalone chapter should I use LaGrange or Zombozo, or which villain for a chapter?
Then should I wait till season 2 for Kevin to appear?
@Fireburnns22 I think it should start bank robbery we’re spider man encounter with jester and the circus freaks
@Al23ko8 Fairs and how do you think i should set it up? Because I was thinking of Zombozo having a circus show in Midtown High, just for it to be an excuse to drain more people Or should it be something else?
What do you think?
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Hey for the Spiderman/Ben 10 story would you have Spider-Man get the symbiote before Ben attacking the deal between the Forever Knights and Highbreed or would you do something different?
If I were to write, I would say peter already broke free from the symbiote grasp before Ben attacked the deal between the forever nights and DNA. Maybe also getting the DNA sample of the symbiote
Hey everyone, how’s it going? I have a question regarding the OC Brian Freewood . Is there anything I should improve about the character, such as his dialogue or traits? Did I do well, or are there areas where I could enhance his character development? Specifically, I’d like feedback on his interactions and dynamics with other characters.
Additionally, I've written some chapters from his story so far—do you like any parts in particular? Are there sections that could use more work or improvement? Any constructive critique would be appreciated.
What X-men villains would you want to see Brian Freewood against?
