slnxbk

I just discovered your story and I really like the idea behind it but the beginning is a bit unrealistic. It would've been cool to have the fist 1-3  chapters in her world. And I kinda think opening a door to another world is kinda cliché. What I also noticed is she is in my opinion too calm. I mean she's in a different world but everything is going to fast. I thought there would be investigations at first before they would offer a place at ua Especially because not everybody can get into that school. I hope you don't mind my opinion  it's your story and you are definitely writing better than other ppl here.