@Moose6399 Hello, I really like it so far. I do appreciate a superhero story that doesn't just jump right into "hey this person is so special" or "one day they just woke up and could shoot fire". I liked the focus on his emotions and his relationship with Lilly because it gives to his character. I do also like they you helped us relate to them like a normal person with dreams and are taking your time digging into the superpowers and superheroes. Just now we are learning more in depth about this prophecy mentioned in the first chapter and why his parents were killed but not too much.
So so far love it!
