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AlasTimeHasCome
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There's a Problem. The Solution is Motivation. Where does Motivation come from? A Positive Mind-set. Best I got. Where does that come from? Being around people that have a Wholesome Influence on you. What can contrast that negatively? Having an overthinking and stressful mind.
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Zara_panter
Hey! I've been passionately working on a fantasy-romance novel for over 5 years and finished the first two books (1500 pages) in a series. Now, as I rewrite and edit the final draft, I've published some chapters in Wattpad and would love some valuable feedback before considering publishing. Would you be up for a read and sharing your thoughts? I have seen your comments on other people's books and I think you are a great reviewer. By reading my book. you will step into the world of 'Sunhide University of Wizardly' a story where magic meets mystery, filled with hidden destinies, and forbidden loves. Perfect for fans of thrilling fantasy, spicy romance and captivating adventures. It would be my honor to have you as my reader. https://www.wattpad.com/story/352894040-the-sunhide-college-of-wizardly
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Zara_panter
Feel free to skim through my book and provide brief feedback on each chapter. Even a short comment is appreciated and can help me improve my writing. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts.❤️
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Zara_panter
It's a constant struggle to capture the essence of a book in just a few sentences, especially when the story is complex and multi-layered. I am constantly revising and refining the description to accurately convey the themes, characters, and events of the book. I'm glad that you found the latest version interesting and super happy that it enticed you to read more!
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AlasTimeHasCome
@Zara_panter Hey, love! I've now seen this and I must say, the first thing I did is read the description. This is a key factor in hooking your readers attention. I'd love to give it a go and see how it is! I won't lie, there's a chance I may ghost read it, so don't expect much of commenting, unless your book finds me in an elated time. Thank you for giving me this chance to read a new style of writing.
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AlasTimeHasCome
There's a Problem. The Solution is Motivation. Where does Motivation come from? A Positive Mind-set. Best I got. Where does that come from? Being around people that have a Wholesome Influence on you. What can contrast that negatively? Having an overthinking and stressful mind.
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neon_constellations
My apologies for sliding into your Conversations board uninvited. I just wanted to grab your attention to my story. It's a GxG story with a dark fantasy theme that I started and completed within two days after finding a random writing prompt while scrolling through Pinterest when I was bored af and searching for motivation. It's completed so you don't have to worry about updates and whatnot.Also, feel free to leave all the comments in the world, they give me life fr. Don't forget to vote and share if you do end up liking it! xoxo, Trix :) Once again, I'm sorry for intruding. Have a nice day ahead!!! https://www.wattpad.com/story/340357471-a-cruel-twist-of-fate-gxg-%E2%9C%93
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neon_constellations
@AlasTimeHasCome Thank you so much for taking your time to read! It really means a lot to me :)
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AlasTimeHasCome
@cherrrycosmos You're not intruding, to be honest I'm glad you reached out for my attention. I don't mind reading new books much less recommended ones, I enjoy it nevertheless. Thank you for bringing my attention to this book. I read the summary you have and it's good. I also don't mind that it's a short story. As for comments, eh. I'm not one to comment much, unless I feel I MUST comment on that one (two or more) specific paragraph(s). Have a great day and authoring life ;)
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HicksScribbles
Thanks for the follow!!
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ch1ck3nNuG2tts
Hi, thank you for adding my book to your list! I hope you'll enjoy reading 'the little omega.' Stay safe, happy, and healthy! ♡