This is just like a tester. Please reply on what do you think about this:
[Chapter 1:
“Where is that medicine?” I muttered silently to myself and dug amongst the shelves of multi-colored bottles.
“Whatcha looking for?” the store clerk, Edlin, swam over to me.
“You know that medicine that treats sore scales? Meredith?”
“Oh! Meridithyne! Its right here!” she gracefully flicked her auburn tail and grabbed a glass bottle filled with a lilac liquid. “Thanks, Edlin.”
“No problem, Talora.”
I left the store and went to the grocery store, which was in the other end of Town Square. Town Square was filled with Mers, male and female, of all ages. “Tal! Over here,” I could hear a very familiar voice call out, Nyissa. Of course, she would try and get my attention. But her fiery red hair was a beacon for me. No one had hair as blazing red as her. She was with my brother, Finn-aka her boyfriend. I mean my best friend and my brother.]
It is a Mermaid/Vampire romance, cause I love paranormal romance stories... and if I were to take a mini test to see which genre I am the best in, it would be Romance (I think). I read that so much, its making me have dreams about them.
I have to go now, and PLEASE reply what do you think on the excerpt. (FYI it is not posted on Wattpad)