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All right. I'm gonna be real, I've noticed Alot of complaints about my first story "collison of worlds", no hate or anything. Criticism is needed in order for people to improve, without it we won't be able to. Ans for those who are complaining about it. I know, but I would like to remind you that, THIS WAS MY VERY FIRST STORY ON WATTPAD
I wrote that back when I was in late highschool. On the cusp of going to college. And I was grieving and going through shit and I didn't have my editors with me at the time. Of course there's gonna be cring, mistakes and shit that doesn't make sense, it was my first ever time writing a book as a anxious late teen!
I'm not complaining about the criticism. Hell, criticize me more! It helps! It makes me want to improve more in my writing style and everything in between. Yeah I'm gone more than a dad leaving for the milk but that's because I got work, a girlfriend and a life outside of writing but that's not gonna stop me in the slightest! So please feel free to criticize. Just don't be a jackass for no reason, I'm looking at you keyboard warriors. That's all I gotta say, I'll see ya guys later!