Charlie Avalin

yes, i looked the moment up on utube. also, what is OMGGGG WAS IT HIM?!?!?! refering to?

@AlayaDarktail OMGGGG WAS IT HIM?!?!?!??! wait Loki js what??? that's actually an entire revelation to me. Iron Man 3 is awesome. :)) I read all your posts!! don't worry, the same thing happens to me a lot

do we want the middle or start of those relationships?

@AlayaDarktail all of these sound good! I would say either Fitz x dex or Cassius x elwin! keep up the good work!

u were the one who requested fitz and dex. cassius and elwin i think would be really funny and cute, and sophia is my oc. im writing a fanfic about when she is found. (takes place after stellarlune) she's a psionipath, empath, and guster.

im now realizing its jack sparrow not jack black

@AlayaDarktail lol

@AlayaDarktail 
            
            5. Make sure you have a good paragraph structure! Start a new paragraph whenever a different character is speaking, or a new topic that you are moving onto starts. 
            Eg.
            Before: Gia examined the opened cupboard in disbelief, turning Dante who was looming over next to her. “Nothing,” Gia commented with a sigh. “Right,” Dante replied, running a hand through his auburn hair. “Let’s move on, then.” Together, the two exited the room, a little disheartened, and moved on to the next they were required to search. 
            
            After: Gia examined the opened cupboard in disbelief, turning Dante who was looming over next to her. 
            
            “Nothing,” Gia commented with a sigh.
            
            “Right,” Dante replied, running a hand through his auburn hair. “Let’s move on, then.” 
            
            Together, the two exited the room, a little disheartened, and moved on to the next they were required to search. 

@AlayaDarktail 
            
            3. Make sure to use descriptive language and varied sentence styles whenever describing something! It shouldn’t just be included in a setting paragraph, but all throughout when the characters are in the plot. Try to use varying sentence styles and punctuation to maintain interest and fluency. 
            Eg. 
            Before: Ada walked into the antique store, looking at an old necklace that she thought was pretty.
            After: Sniffling due to the dust that was invading her nose, Ada sauntered into Mrs. John’s antique store—examining the gloriously packed isles for anything that might peek her interest. 
            
            4. Make sure to go back and edit anything that you wrote!! Make sure there are no errors, and read your work aloud. Make sure that there are commas and full stops in the correct places, whenever starting a new sentence or when you yourself takes a pause when reading. 
            Eg.
            Before: Tom stumbled over the vine poking out of the cobblestone road cursing under his breath as he fell and scraped the skin of his knee against the rough sharp rocks
            After: Tom stumbled over the vine poling out of the cobblestone road, cursing under his breath as he fell and scraped the skin of his knee against the rough, sharp rocks. 

@AlayaDarktail 
            1. When writing, you should do your best beforehand to establish your setting and character circumstances before any action. Describe briefly in a paragraph where the character is, what there aim is, how the feel, etc. :D
            
            2. When your characters are interacting with each other or their environment, its important to establish their personality while doing. Certain characters will say things in ways that others won’t, and thats the same for doing an action. 
            Eg. If a character sees someone has taken their seat at a table they might demand that they move if they are confident/arrogant. If they are more shy and polite, they might sit in a different seat and say nothing to the person.