Alba76tross

That's a "NO"...
          	Why..?
          	After reading 15 chapters....
          	Elena: me me me.........
          	Adonis:me me me...........
          	It gives the impression of not connection between them at all....
          	makes me wonder if probably the writer was very young when she write this...like the way a teenager writes, full of enthusiasm but lost all the small details...
          	You have to build the connection, the emotions slowly, delicate slowly, with charm...not throw them on the table like a piece of meat...
          	Sorry  this is my evaluation for this  book...
          	
          	
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/312136645

JSPRomComs

Hi there, I stumbled across your profile after noticing we had similar tastes in books! My name is Jana and I’m a romantic comedy writer. I’m working on reaching out to people and passing out “virtual flyers” for my completed romcom novel, Stolen Heart. Thought I’d drop one here in case you were interested. Feel free to ignore or toss it away if not!! Appreciate your time ♥️
          
          Xoxo, Jana
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/310051652?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=JSPRomComs&wp_originator=3Nlg0UANGaiDgshxNaz1H3XcDiSux75HRdknqc8iemk9TRSbfCm6rWcjv1eK%2B4sQ0xQcXGfQLNV0Y4OxqH1vl7%2BbCLB%2B2fXYKViMPjIh22fIUpEfCwrEq6ES91qW6syo

JSPRomComs

@Alba76tross thanks so much! I appreciate it and hope you enjoy it ♥️
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Alba76tross

@JSPRomComs Hi there too...
            I also LOVE "pride and prejudice", totally adore "how to lose a guy in 10 days"...
            I am always with a book on hand...
            English is not my first language so i can say how easy or pleasantly you can read  a book in engrish language...
            Anyway thanks for sharing your book, for sure I will read it and i let you know my thoughts
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Alba76tross

That's a "NO"...
          Why..?
          After reading 15 chapters....
          Elena: me me me.........
          Adonis:me me me...........
          It gives the impression of not connection between them at all....
          makes me wonder if probably the writer was very young when she write this...like the way a teenager writes, full of enthusiasm but lost all the small details...
          You have to build the connection, the emotions slowly, delicate slowly, with charm...not throw them on the table like a piece of meat...
          Sorry  this is my evaluation for this  book...
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/312136645