AlbaPoulzen

Dear Reader.
          	
          	I'm sorry that I have removed some of my books. As I grew as a writer, I felt ashamed of having such a flat story to share. Two of my books still have a lot of editing work (Killian & Collided in a threesome), but I will rewrite them to make them even better. 
          	I'm working on Hearts Made Of Glass right now, and it's so much better than ever before. But I want it to be close to flawless. English isn't my language, making expressing my characters' feelings hard. Despite that, I still want to keep writing in English to share my stories. 
          	
          	Would you who read ‘Hearts Made Of Glass’ for me to share my first draft with you? 
          	
          	I don't need you to tell me how good it is. I need you to be critical of things I missed out on or that are unclear. (Of course, positive feedback is always welcome) 
          	However, when criticizing, give me more than just “this is bad.” or “I don't like this character doing/saying this.”
          	
          	Let me know by commenting below.
          	
          	Thank you 
          	
          	Best regards 
          	Alba Poulzen

AlbaPoulzen

Dear Reader.
          
          I'm sorry that I have removed some of my books. As I grew as a writer, I felt ashamed of having such a flat story to share. Two of my books still have a lot of editing work (Killian & Collided in a threesome), but I will rewrite them to make them even better. 
          I'm working on Hearts Made Of Glass right now, and it's so much better than ever before. But I want it to be close to flawless. English isn't my language, making expressing my characters' feelings hard. Despite that, I still want to keep writing in English to share my stories. 
          
          Would you who read ‘Hearts Made Of Glass’ for me to share my first draft with you? 
          
          I don't need you to tell me how good it is. I need you to be critical of things I missed out on or that are unclear. (Of course, positive feedback is always welcome) 
          However, when criticizing, give me more than just “this is bad.” or “I don't like this character doing/saying this.”
          
          Let me know by commenting below.
          
          Thank you 
          
          Best regards 
          Alba Poulzen

AlbaPoulzen

Hi everyone! 
          I'm still editing the chapters and will soon upload Chapter 10 of Hearts Made Of Glass. However, on April 15, 2024, Wattpad’s guidelines will be changed, and all characters under 18 can’t be shown in any sexual content. Everything needs to happen behind closed doors with no details whatsoever, or an AI will remove the book, maybe even close my account. So, if you read the book Hearts Made Of Glass and you want the yummy details, I recommend you to read it on my InKitt, where all will be shown. 
          
          InKitt: AlbaPoulzen
          
          XoXo

AlbaPoulzen

@SeraDrake Yeah, with that, I agree. I'm on this app to see if people enjoy the story before taking it to Amazon. Because it costs to make money as well ☺️
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SeraDrake

@AlbaPoulzen - Agree that Wattpad is definitely NOT a good place for a professional. Neither is Inkitt. They're okay places to get your name and work some exposure, but get sucked into a Wattpaad Creators or Inkitt Galatea contract, and you screw yourself over. Exclusivity, but with insultingly terrible pay.
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AlbaPoulzen

@SeraDrake It is okay that we are and think differently ☺️ We have a different goal, and mine is to live on my books and get them on screen one day ☺️ I didn't educate myself in writing and editing to stay here ☺️
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