So I've read the first two chapters of that huge Sonic the Hedgehog fan fiction. Overall, I really enjoyed them. The plot is very easy to understand, even for non-Sonic fans and is extremely exciting page after page. I like you added a lot of lore from both the Archie comics and Sonic Boom, and expanded the Sonic universe so much. The characters are perfectly in character, with not a single flaw so far. However, I would like a bit more description with both the outfits and the characters, as it can get kind of confusing at times. Other than that, you outdid yourself. I give it an 8.5/10!
