chocolate-waafer

Hey:) I see you're a fairly new writer and I'm also writing as well. Wanna do a read for read so we can give each other honest feedback? 

AlbinaKayastha

@jmariewrites  do you think should i rewrite my chapters??
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AlbinaKayastha

@jmariewrites thanks for your response ,it gave me new ideas for description of my characters..i am not a pro at giving feedback but will look at urs too 
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chocolate-waafer

 I'll give you feedback. Just tell me what you think of mine..and thanks 
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