@Albyr_Noredyl
You’re probably not going to see this as I’m a little late writing it but thank you for writing this story. I’ve been looking for it for YEARS and seeing your adaptation of it made my whole year. Thank you. also one more thing, in the beginning you said you had screen shots of the original story is that correct? If so is there a way for me to get them. If not that’s totally fine, amazing story, I hope you keep writing so I can keep reading!
Finally. It's all published.
@arkon2019: "Do you plan on writing your own novel in the future?" Oh yeah, 'course! I'm not gonna post a single adaptation and then disappear... hopefully. As it is though, I'm lacking in a passionate drive to present a certain idea... Sci-fi calls to me, however.
Congrats man! I just wanted to say I really like all the additions to the chapters to tie lose ends and further develop characters. (Levi and Jamie fluff :3) it was genuinely nice to be able to go down the memory lane so appreciate it. Also in slight side note do you plan on writing your own novel in the future? Because as a reader of many fanfics, I think you could easily write a compelling book that draws you to the next chapter. Anyways Gratz on the completion and I hope you consider writing a book of your own.
Huzzah, closure! There's still some extra stuff near the end for Out Loud: Rephrased, but for the most part the story's complete.
That said, that doesn't mean there ain't unfinished business. Stay tuned.
So uh... I got burned to a piece of charcoal after a beach day, so I've been loafing around recovering 'til the pain subsides. Should be in good shape to put out another chapter tomorrow.
Sorry about the lack of activity on OLR, y'all. This week's been busy.
A bit late to the party, but happy 4th to my American readers! Hope you're havin' good burgers/dawgs/pizza today.
[In the pantry. Albyr enters stage right, stepping silently.]
[He grabs a peanut butter cup.]
[In a hushed sing-song tone:] "I'm a thief..."
[He takes a pack of gum.] "I'm a stealer..."
Sorry 'bout the two dead days, needed a small break.
Also also, if you've been following this story, you should know that Chapter 20 was where we left off, so enjoy the feed of new chapters!
And now I introduce to you: the main and (probably) only reason I marked this story as mature. Chapter fuckin' 19. You can skip it if you want, the later chapters provide enough vague context to be clued in.
Finding it wonderful that as I go through this story, I find less and less I need to fix... but then again I'm less worried about checking dialogue to see if I need to switch a period for a comma. Miiight want people to point that out for me.