thedisgruntledfairy Mar 13, 2016 Report CommentLink to CommentCode of ConductWattpad Safety Portal So far its pretty good. Just don't make the paragraphs as long. Make breaks in between so the reader doesn't get bored and lose their place while readin View 6 more replies AleahKaloni @Stay_Flirtin thanks im working on the third and its gonna be kinda longer Mar 16, 2016 • Reply Report CommentLink to CommentCode of ConductWattpad Safety Portal thedisgruntledfairy @Stay_Flirtin i like the second chapter so far so good Mar 14, 2016 • Reply Report CommentLink to CommentCode of ConductWattpad Safety Portal thedisgruntledfairy @Stay_Flirtin alrite Mar 13, 2016 • Reply Report CommentLink to CommentCode of ConductWattpad Safety Portal