Alex13Creations

Running a little late but new zzz chapter tonight

Alex13Creations

I don't usually go back and fix my chapters, even when I make grammar mistakes lol just bc I usually say it is what it is. But I went back and fixed the very first chapter of the Zenless story bc I realized that at no point did I ever mention the fact that Shion has purple hair, and this bothers me

Deltaoftherune

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Just read the final chapter of Atonement, and I gotta say, I really like your story. I generally thank you for making this; it feels like this could actually happen in canon! 20/10 story right here 
          I hope you make a sequel(or continuation) to this story(similar to your Harley Quinn story), covering the metal virus and (possibly) imposter syndrome. Zero's character is fascinating, and I love the parallels between zero and shadow(both in design and origin).
          I could see Eggman make a "metal zero" since he knows how much of a threat he is(given he would actively kill him).  If you're out there, thank you for making atonement and the other stories on your page really like your atonement story. I generally thank you for making this; it feels like this could actually happen in canon! 20/10 story right here 
          I hope you make a sequel(or continuation) to this story(similar to your Harley Quinn story) , covering the metal virus and (possibly) imposter syndrome and frontiers. Zero's character is fascinating, and I love the parallels between zero and shadow(both in design and origin).
          I could see Eggman make a "metal zero" since he knows how much of a threat he is(given he would actively kill him).  If you're out there, thank you for making atonement, and the other stories on your page! <3

Alex13Creations

This comment made me very happy thank you!
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Deltaoftherune

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Was rereading atonements and I have some questions ^-^
          
          1. Future tails mentioned that shortly after Praxis and zero killed sonic and eggman, they took over the world, how did they manage to kill Knuckles? And what did they do to the master emerald? 
          
          2. When does the events of sonic atonement take place? After forces or in the main timeline?
          
          3. What happened to starline and sage during the events of atonement?
          
          4. We know how Future Zero kills Sonic, but how did Zero and Praxis kill Eggman? 
          
          5. Given the circomstances in the future, how did shadow get captured(again) lol

Alex13Creations

@Deltaoftherune Let me answer your easier questions first lol 
            
            2) After forces but before frontiers
            
            3) Not present
            
            Circling back to the alt future, they killed Eggman and Sonic on the same day. Pulling it off relied upon the surprise attack of Zero coming out of nowhere, killing Sonic first, then catching Eggman off guard during the invasion. From there, Max's Praxis program was used to take over Eggman's entire arsenal all at once. That's how they took control. Max doesn't toy around like Eggman does so they used guerilla tactics to pick the rest off one at a time
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Alex13Creations

Guys I just read my story and it filled my head with so many ideas: the characters, the descriptions, the arcs, it has such a cinematic quality to it. I think that it would do really great in a comic/manga form. I just so happen to be a digital artist that specializes in this kind of thing and I work based on commissions. We should totally discuss this further!

Alex13Creations

@Deltaoftherune [insert story title here] really inspired me
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Deltaoftherune

@Alex13Creations which story are you talking about?
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