@Traveler_F_R_I_Die@Traveler_F_R_I_Die The way you Write the story is beautiful! Very descriptive! The only thing I would say is that you need to add something that makes the readers heart throb. Something not expected. Otherwise its amazing! Beautiful writing. ❤️❤️❤️❤️ Could you try my book? Called Revenge. ?? ❤️ xo