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MorganaWray
ScarletTheHealer Pls read my paranormal romance book called immortal obsession
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AlexHarrington
@ChuckyIceheart Okay, I won't lie. The chapters are short. Try and be more...descriptive. Imagine yourself in the main characters shoes. Imagine what they feel, see and or smell. Honestly, you could combine some of the chapters to make a real chapter. But overall, I like the story. It isn't bad at all.
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