Hi, I really loved your two books but they both have the same problem and I didn't know they were both written by you. If you check your books you might see my comments on the stories, the major problem is that the stories are not so descriptive and most actions of the characters are either unreasonable or are unrealistic with the antagonist having motives that don't make sense.
All in all, the stories are unique and creative but require major editing.
Thank you.