Troldu-D-Mench

Hey, I have a suggestion for your One Piece story.
          
          I propose that Yorozu is a member of CP9, being from Jabra's group who had a crush on a certain Revolutionary Army agent, Yorozu having killed 101 of them because she liked the number sequence 1-2-4, the "boys" having only killed 23. When Lucci's group would arrive, she would throw herself on him like a Juvia, before attacking him (start of the fight in Chapter 219; The "fight" ends when Yorozu blocks Lucci's kick with a plate of hardened liquid metal.).
          
          Her Power Level would be 1979, being the fourth strongest before Blueno at 820 and after the "Beaster Trio" of CP9 (Lucci at 4000, Kaku at 2200 and Jabra at 2180) and would also possess the Six Powers while having variants. She would have as Devil Fruit the Metal-Metal Fruit (Meta Meta no Mi) that allows Yorozu to control liquid metal, making her a Liquid Metal Human. She would have a crush on Lucci, having the same behavior as with JJK's Sukuna (she wants to teach love to those who don't know it), having fallen under his spell when they were children (where Cipher Pol agents are trained during childhood). She would wear a male uniform but would have, like Gray Fullbuster, the annoying habit of undressing without realizing it, often finding herself without her top (like Cana Alberona's style; she has a swimsuit as underwear and underwear as a swimsuit), but doing it especially when she likes a fight. She would also have a rival relationship with Kalifa, the Soap Human calling her shameless for getting naked all the time while the Liquid Metal Human would call her a tease for wearing fishnet stockings at work to make out that she is the "weakest" of the team, but the two would get along when it comes to teasing Spandam on sexual arasement. She also has the comical side of thinking, with Jabra, that getting a Devil Fruit close to her will make her explode, as well as wanting to prevent Kalifa from becoming stronger like Jabra with Kaku.

Alex__305

@ Troldu-D-Mench  Happy New Year! To be honest, while what you wrote there seems pretty interesting, I actually like to stay 2-3 chapters ahead from what I post, so Yorozu's introduction, and the beginning of the fight, is already written. Her dialogue isn't as substantial as yours, but that's because it's only her introduction, and didn't want her to take up the entire spotlight from the other members.
            
            Just so you know, you don't need to come up with anything big for her, since she is a new character, taken from your suggestion, I don't have a bigger plan for her, at least for now. So she'll only appear when the CP9(or 0) also appear.
            
            Also, I don't know exactly what you mean with episode 264 since I haven't watched the anime, and I'm only taking from the manga. And the photo from the link doesn't seem to work.
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Troldu-D-Mench

Hey! First: Happy new year.
            
            I know it's narrow, but I would like to ask you to give me a little time before leaving the next chapter because I have ideas and a scenario for the group in the Tower of Justice, since you skipped the passage from episode 264.
             You see, I'll be more specific in my next post, because you see, I'm currently coloring Yorozu's image that will introduce her in the chapter where she fights Ryomen. Here's the rendering to give you an idea and it's not the final:
            
            https://img.wattpad.com/6c13599796802692bb5b0f7305ee7f9da49c96f4/68747470733a2f2f73332e616d617a6f6e6177732e636f6d2f776174747061642d6d656469612d736572766963652f53746f7279496d6167652f727048337836414b61474f4b58513d3d2d313437373534393936332e313831373363373031396566303033633732363332363032323832322e706e67
            
             That's what I was thinking when I said she had Makima's outfit: She would wear Control Devil's big black cloak instead of a kimono when she don't in suit. And as for the rival relationship with Kalifa, I suggest she also talks about Alpha.
            
            Kalifa: At least your parents had the good idea to stop having kids when they had them. There must have been a mistake
            Yorozu: When we talk about the devil, you should ask Alpha for news. I have to say that even if it was a year ago now, the trauma must still be fresh in her mind. What an unworthy "Big Sister" you are.
            
            At the mention of Alpha’s name, a slight vein appeared on Kalifa’s forehead.
            
            Yorozu: I have to say that there are advantages to being an only child. At least, neither me nor my progenitors have to be ashamed of being related to an incompetent who got beaten by a kid who was barely ten years old. Both of you go and retrain as real nurse and secretary, it seems that you play these undercover roles very well, even too well.
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Alex__305

@ Troldu-D-Mench  True, he would be extremely overpowered, but that's a big part of his character, and it's not like he has to be fought alone, jumping enemies is starting to become more and more common for the Straw Hats in this fic. Plus I don't feel like he'd willingly work for the WG otherwise. It could also add an interesting setting where he could get rid of the control over him, and just be left with absolute overwhelming power and nothing to tie him to this world, which could open up much more paths for him if I go this route.
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HatimNsr

@Alex__305 In the story Cursed Seas and Slashing Tides are all the female characters in the harem Ryomen?

Duhpage19

Only 5? Wow that seems a little small compared to the huge cast of waifus he could get in One Piece. 
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Alex__305

@ HatimNsr  No, at most it would be around  5
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