Okay, so, for any of you out there who are reading the Omega Chronicles, or want to, I would really like your opinions! There is an author coming to my school at the end of next semester and they will be receiving a copy of each of my classes manuscripts, so I need to redo this! Constructive criticism will be HUGELY appreciated! I'd really like to have some outside opinions, so please, if you can help, do! I have three months to rewrite the whole thing, so if you have time, please help! Thanks!