@Alexi_Newa
Hey there! (Does anybody even remember me?) I posted a couple of new poems! I couldn't get myself to write any more, but hopefully I'll grow more poetic soon? Either way, big thanks to @TheMadPoetGold for helping me improve my writing slowly but surely!
I PASSED ALL MY EXAMS!!!
Hey there! For anyone wondering why I’m missing: I’m having my last exam on the 9th of June and will probably start posting by the end of the month.
In the meantime, huge thanks to all the readers and followers (there are now almost 10 of you!)
Just realised it’s been a while since I last posted, so I’ll post 5 more poems today! Also, my poembook has nearly 700 views and my account 5 subscribers! I want to say, I’m really thankful to all of you for reading and voting on my work! It means a world to me!
Hello!
Thank you for voting on my book 'The Wind'
Have a good day! :D
Aww thank you so much!
You do write poetry? Then I have to read them! :D
I'm sure I'll love your book ^^
I loved your poems! Despite their brevity the depth of thought they allow is near-endless! I’ve been feeling like my latest poems are missing it for a while now.
Have a wonderful day!
500 reads on my poem collection already! Big thanks to all of the readers, voters and commenters. I’m soon going to publish another 5 poems soon, so keep your eye out for updates!
Hello, thank you for reading Winter Snowflake On Hand! I hope you enjoyed. I appreciate it a lot! If you have any feedback, feel free to left behind.
-Lily
@Alexi_Newa aww! You don't know how much glad I'm to hear it. This story is my best production till now and your words make me confident. I will try to improve more! Thanks for your kind words!
Thank you so much for texting me! I actually wanted to describe my criticism of the story because of how much I liked it.
First of all, everything in the story fits well. The descriptions are imaginative and fluid, just the kind to draw warm and fuzzy pictures in one’s head without permission; the exposition is just right to know enough to be interested, but never enough to feel like you know where the story will go next.
Secondly, you used archetypes and short but powerful descriptions so well that the reader quickly engages with your characters and yearns to see them develop. In other words, such an easy story to understand shows its full potential in boosting engagement to astronomical levels.
Lastly, to criticise your work a bit (though I really don’t want to!) I have to point out that there are some grammatical mistakes which is suboptimal.
But that’s it for the criticism! Your story is amazin and impactful. Having read it now I feel inspired to write something just as engaging and emotional! I’ll be looking forward to your further works!
- Your new fan
Just posted 4 new poems! Go check them out!
Hey guys! I had a busy week so I’ll be posting only 3-4 poems on the weekends. Still, I hope you’ll like them when you see them!
Another addition to the poetry collection!
Also, we’re now #25 in poetry, #2 in mindful, #3 in imaginativ, #6 in thought-provoking and #8 in inspiring! This is amazing! ❤️❤️❤️!