Alexia_G_2006

WARNING!!! Fixing major plot holes in the story right now!! Also working on a big chapter so look out for that

Meeleheide

Hello, Alexia.
          I discovered you on the Writers of the Round Table discord channel and I’m happy to read your book and share my thoughts.
          First of all, your introduction of, Ace, is very dramatic, in a good way. I’m always drawn in by stories that open with someone intensely injured and fleeing danger. I’ve kicked off a few that way myself.
          Your story is also much better paced and better focused and structured than many others I’ve seen from people newly sharing.
          My own stories tend to be a slow boil that build over time to a big payoff, but there is nothing wrong with a good old action-packed thrill ride. I will be very interested to see where the ties to Egyptian mythology take the story, so I hope that you will continue to write it.
          I am also writing a book, here, on Wattpad. And, while I welcome all readers and all feedback, please be aware that my story is intended for adults (18+)
          So please see the content warnings in its description if you decide to read it.

Alexia_G_2006

I AM SO HAPPY!!! THIS IS THE FIRST COMMENT I HAVE GOTTEN ON MY WRITING AND MY WORK!! Thank you so SO much, this means a lot for me. You made my day! I did not expect any readers at all giving the fact that I’m a beginner to writing. 
            
            Yes I am also a huge of fan of good ol’ action movies and I love when they kick off with the main character being injured. Probably the best thing. This is why it’s going to be a thriller ride with mercenaries and later on cool fights :D
            
            The point of the novel is also to have slight political references , which is why I have decited to add a very underrated egyptian god to the story ,Nemty. He was described as one of the egyptian gods who has been punished by the other deities for going against Horus. I find him very interesting. As a self proclaimed centrist I do relate always being hated and judged by others for not agreeing with politics in general because i see each ideology as being twisted in it’s own way. 
            
            So thank you! I am almost 17 so I am close to 18 but i will be careful! I’m sure your writing is very good!
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