Alexis Camacho

If you have tim­­­­e could you check out my­ s­to­ry­, I would really b­e gr­atef­ul. ­It's my firs­t one,­ and i­ts not­ finis­hed yet ­but feed­back is ­­always appreciated. 
          Here is a link ­­­­just in case you have th­e ­ti­me to read it: 
          http://www.watt­­­­pad.com/368564-chapter-1-him 
          Thanks for your time :) 

@WishitwasU 
          Well ill read the an idiots guide to love ... I would read the others but I HATE vampire werewolf(or panther haha) stuff idk why and I'm not sayin your story isn't awesome I just don't like those storys *sholer shrug* and the other one I don't like the hole princess thing again I have no idea why I have a fedish with it haha ok but for sure am gonna cheek out an idiots guide to love :D

hii!! 
          i was wondering if you could read my story. it is called ONE YEAR.....AND EVERYTHING CHANGED? 
          it would really mean a lot to me if you could read, vote, comment, fan....anything. 
          thanks 
          niki

@Just-Krissy: I guess it was just weird to me cause I have never seen a guy cry like that ! But I love the story <3 ! U have amazing writing skills I’m totally jealous<3 !

Lol, in chapter 23 you said Damen and Trent were acting all girly... Teqnically they weren't...Yes most guys don't cry and hold themselves together to try and be "tough" ... But if anyone was told that the person they loved might not ever wake up; they well break down. I mean when my grandma passed away.. I saw my big tough dad break down...When my b.f's grandpa passed away; I watched him break down.
          Guys break down just the same as girls; although they only really break down during EXTREME moments, unlike girls. :D