Alexis Onyx Chimera

Yes thanks you - much clearer. the whole thing is VERY clever! I'm like do i want to ask you to mess around and try another just for fun - lol. There's lots of chapters to inspire your obvious talent for this :-)

@Thedouglasclan
          
          Yes you are right it is practically completely transparent. 
          
          yes i intended for the body to completely vanish up above, the red portion is actually a tree, with a couple of dark birds posted about. (could signify all kinds of things)
          I'll post it again, once i polish it up with those adjustments.
          glad you liked it. 

Hey, this is very good with one change needed :-) The Unforeseen, does not show up at all. Also is the "body" above the line supposed to totally vanish? - not sure just asking. :-)
          
          Also I get the shattered glass - very clever and the legs of the boy, what though is the red part coming from. i ma VERY intrigued by this :-)

Cool :-)