Alfredastralheart

@VOID-KING A solid critique, I won't deny that my first few stories may look like they were written by Ai that's because I am only just starting out that's why I'm willing to accept critique so I can improve

@AlexanderSzivy you said you don't use Ai but all of your so called stories don't have a single Dialogue, no Interaction between characters, It's Just a Description telling Noting more the wording also Feels like it's made by AI, The breaks was Less used.
            
            It's not an Opinion but a Critique.

@VOID-KING I don't use Ai, everyone is entitled to an opinion and I wish to hear your opinion on how my stories I have written toxic towards the writing community.