I’ve just your work and I’m going to honestly say that I enjoy it! You’re a very talented writer, not to mention you seem to have a good understanding or proper punctuation and grammar. Your work isn’t too rushed and flows nicely from one part of the chapter to the next and is easy to understand.
I’m honored you’d come to me of all people to add feedback on it, and I’ll support your story as well. Good job and keep going as I’m anticipating your next chapters, fighting!❤️