Alice Peterson

@dearestpaige no problem, can't wait to read it! Xx 

thank you! I'm actually halfway through the next chapter and the whole chapter is about them working in the bakery. I appreciate the feedback!!!! 

@dearestpaige Hi, I love your story! Since it's so early on in the book, it's hard to give feedback, but what I will say is maybe get Gwyn and Mason in the bakery working together, either next chapter or the one after it. It would be nice to have Mason say a bit more to Gwyn. Though boys will be boys! Also keep the humour up, people love a story that's romantic and funny. Keep writing! It's looking great Xxx 

@raghdanezzat Hey there, I checked out your book BLUES, sorry it's taken me a long time. I think it's a great book with lots of potential. Keep writing xx

@raghdanezzat Hi! I'd be happy to :)

@s7vensuns I would love to  I'll get to it as soon as we can, thanks x