AlicelookingOut

cherokeegypsy00

You seem very nice, and if you dont mind Id love it if you checked out my story Secrets In The Bridge. Its only two chapters right now, but I promise you its worth the time. Tell me what you think by commenting on the story if you dont mind. Thanks!(:

literatureloverxx

I love your story, but your spacing takes away from it. I don't know if it is purposeful but it distracts the reader. Make sure sentences are completed before you make a space. Thanks, and I still love the story. (story: I broke into a vampires house...)