@KaiEliseee ok so I read the book. Honestly I'm ready for the next update but I think you should work on adding periods in between the sentences and make new paragraphs so the reader won't feel like they're reading a lot. Oh and careful with the quotation marks bc you can confuse the reader. And in the multimedia, make sure the pics are clear and straight so we can see the characters clearly. But overall you're off to a good start! I would love to keep reading your book!!