AliciaRose

@RadicalEzz ok im writing this as i read it: i think that in chapter 1 the paragraphs are way to long making it really mudling. the vocab usage is really good and i think that none of the words are too complicated of too simple. your book cover is actually quite good and i think you did pretty well with it. i dont usually read books with this type of plot but i think that you wrote it pretty well. i'm usually more of a no-drama-happily-ever-after person but in any case i reall enjoyed reading your book and im stoked for future uploads :) keep up the amazing work! x

AliciaRose

@RadicalEzz ok im writing this as i read it: i think that in chapter 1 the paragraphs are way to long making it really mudling. the vocab usage is really good and i think that none of the words are too complicated of too simple. your book cover is actually quite good and i think you did pretty well with it. i dont usually read books with this type of plot but i think that you wrote it pretty well. i'm usually more of a no-drama-happily-ever-after person but in any case i reall enjoyed reading your book and im stoked for future uploads :) keep up the amazing work! x

RadicalEzz

@AliciaRose Hey! I just finished. Your story was good. but I think...I THINK! (Maybe my eyes were wrong) but there were a few errors. but none the less it was fantastic! if you got the chance, could you return the favour? let me know what you think about my story. Personally and Honestly I think it sucks like rotten eggs. haha. yeaaahs Ca't wait for your upload! :D x

RadicalEzz

Hey! Thanks for becoming a fan! It means so much. Honestly. I'm about to check your story out so I'm pretty stoked for that. I'll give you my input along the chapters. :) Votes? You definitely got those :D Thanks so much! again.