@RadicalEzz ok im writing this as i read it: i think that in chapter 1 the paragraphs are way to long making it really mudling. the vocab usage is really good and i think that none of the words are too complicated of too simple. your book cover is actually quite good and i think you did pretty well with it. i dont usually read books with this type of plot but i think that you wrote it pretty well. i'm usually more of a no-drama-happily-ever-after person but in any case i reall enjoyed reading your book and im stoked for future uploads :) keep up the amazing work! x
hey do you think you could tell me if my stories suck or not? i really want to know what other people think. if you dont have enough time thats cool. but it would mean a lot to me if you read one. RACHEL
Your story is cool. :) I thank you so much for whatever you did to help my friend (dreamernow31) I think your advice really helped. I was wondering if you would read mine?
Thank you for fanning and the helpful advice!!! I made the fantasy one have a really long and descriptive title because people seemed to read it more :)
@RadicalEzz ok im writing this as i read it: i think that in chapter 1 the paragraphs are way to long making it really mudling. the vocab usage is really good and i think that none of the words are too complicated of too simple. your book cover is actually quite good and i think you did pretty well with it. i dont usually read books with this type of plot but i think that you wrote it pretty well. i'm usually more of a no-drama-happily-ever-after person but in any case i reall enjoyed reading your book and im stoked for future uploads :) keep up the amazing work! x
@AliciaRose Hey! I just finished. Your story was good. but I think...I THINK! (Maybe my eyes were wrong) but there were a few errors. but none the less it was fantastic! if you got the chance, could you return the favour? let me know what you think about my story. Personally and Honestly I think it sucks like rotten eggs. haha. yeaaahs Ca't wait for your upload! :D x
Hey! Thanks for becoming a fan! It means so much. Honestly. I'm about to check your story out so I'm pretty stoked for that. I'll give you my input along the chapters. :) Votes? You definitely got those :D Thanks so much! again.
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