JiRO Redace

I wrote this a bit while now, was wonderin' if I'll get some readers if they see how I write. I hope you like it. https://www.wattpad.com/story/73599710

Bummer!
          
          Guys, sorry fer the inactive...
          I just released Chap 3 today, hope ya like it!

I just noticed  that most of the readers skipped the introduction. Was it because of the "Foreword"?
          
          I hope they can get by though...

Funny, Erde has a creepy cover, it wasn't supposed to be that alien. I just have no choice bcoz my bro took 2 weeks to draw the cover of Erde.
          I just need to scan and color it and it will be cool.

The visuals also are almost up guys, I will be notifying you if it's  done.
          
          Thanks to my bro for the character design and for the future cover of this story.