AlingPercy

As someone who had read lots of novel
          Your  stories are kinda okay but it needs lots of improvement...coz most characters are one dimensional and the narration also doesn't have true feelings...i feel empty.. I'm not critically judging u but I am just telling you that it's okay to be direct but don't be too much na kasi nawawala yung pagkatao nang isang karakter eh..para lang siyang lazy character writing...pede natin lagyan nang more description and detailed storytelling para mas malaman yung story..
          
          hahaha grabe ko maka comment...
          sorry...peace and love  my friend....... love ya
          

Update pinsan!!!!