AlisBorealis

Debating on whether or not to make it cannon that sandy lives in a sand castle.

tellmewhatmylifeis

@AlisBorealis very late to seeing this, it's cannon because I say so
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AlisBorealis

Teehee

AlisBorealis

@tellmewhatmylifeis ITS SO OK, I HAD A SHITTY COUPKE OF HOURS AFTER THIS POSTED AND NOW I FEEL A LOT BETTER SO THANK YOU
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tellmewhatmylifeis

@AlisBorealis I TOTALLY WOULDVE READ THE CHAPTER RIGHT WHEN IT CAME OUT BUT I WAS WORKING THE LUNCH SHIFT AT MY JOB
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AlisBorealis

My biggest mistake? Showing someone from my school my wattpad account in hopes of becoming friends with that person. Now, people ask me about jack frost daily. 
          
          Hi person from my school! If you’re reading this, my reading lists don’t belong to me. I would never read those things, how dare you. Feel free to check out When Lightning Strikes though! 
          
          (No hard feelings by the way, I know I didn’t specify not to tell others about this) 

SinfulRegret

My bad. We can still be friends and now you can talk to them about Jack Frost (good). Someone definitely must have hacked your Wattpad account and put those reading lists on there because it for sure wasn’t you who made them.
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AlisBorealis

ITS OUT HAHAHAHAAHAHA 
          
          I’m so happy to be done with the fight scene and I can guarantee you the next chapter will be out sooner than that one was. I just cannot fight scene and it took me so long to get something that I was decently okay with. 
          
          
          
          also would y’all want to see the parts that I take out of the book? Like just to see what could have been? I’ve drafted full chapters and deleted them in their entirety cause it didn’t fit the character so… idk just a thought. 
          
          Anyway, gonna go work on the next chapter now!

AlisBorealis

1575 words, on to round two of editing.
          
          (I usually only do two, one extremely thorough in rewording things and then a second read through to make sure everything sounds right but this time I’m doing three since it was written in such a haste for NaNoWriMo)
          
          
          Also just know I really did try with the fight scene. It’s not the best but I’ve never written one before so please don’t be to harsh when the time comes. 

AlisBorealis

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Causally forgetting about NaNoWriMo and then pulling 850 words out of some fucking place. (My goad each year is usually 10000)
          
          Anyway due to NaNoWriMo I will not be updating WLS this month (wow such a change from my usually) BUT I will have a shit ton of unedited first draft chapters to post in December so….. that will be fun! 
          
          Also my question of how tf do you fight scene still stands. I swear to god the entire interaction is currently just “Lilly hits Skylar. Skylar dodges. Skylar attempts to hit Lilly but is blocked. Lightning and powers go PEW PEW PEW” 
          
          Anyway I’m happy cause I finally get to write more cold spark content in the next few chapters!