AlishaParwez

I know I have said the next update may come on the 15th of this month but I have still not written 1000 words till now So it will take time , I will try my best to finish it asap . 
          	Thank you

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The ride home was as lively as our town's graveyard. I was glued to the door the entire time, ready to jump out the minute we got to my house or just in case he decided to bring up what Dream Hero had had no problem discussing. I clutched the door handle like it was a lifeline and prayed it wouldn't result in me jumping out of a moving car.
          
          Hero didn't seem to notice. 
          
          It was clear that his mind was somewhere else. He didn't try to talk to me like he had done back in class which was good because all that I could think about was the fact that he had friendzoned me and that he had gotten Melissa's name wrong.
          
          I wanted to correct him so bad that I just—
          
          "It's Melissa." I blurted out the minute I got out of the car. "The girl Donovan's with, her name is Melissa. Not Melinda."
          
          "Okay? Potato Tomato." was his response. He looked at my hand that was still clutching the car door before looking back at me. "Can I go now?"
          
          "It's actually," I chuckled nervously, letting go of the door. "It's, um, tomato—Potato Potato and Tomato Tomato but I get your confusion—"
          
          "Harley."
          
          "Hm?"
          
          "Close the door." He muttered and I scrambled to do just that before rushing to get inside so that I could scream into my pillow at how ridiculous I had just been."Harley." He called out once more and I screeched to a halt like an unoiled robot, waiting for him to speak.
          
          "Check your messages once in a while." He mumbled. "Otherwise exchanging numbers would be pointless, wouldn't it?"
          
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          For your next read❤️
           https://www.wattpad.com/story/377348659-Socially-Awkward

writer_sehherk

He fell in love with a Ladaku Vimaan. 
          
          He's calm. She's chaos. Together? Pure trouble.
          
          Adah Ahuja is a 24-year-old advocate who believes in justice, honesty... and throwing hands when required. Youngest in the family, pampered to perfection, and absolutely unbothered about what people think except when it comes to one man.
          
          Vihaan Shergill.
          
          The smug, too-handsome-for-his-own-good neurologist who's made it his life's mission to mess with her peace. She hates him. He knows it. And somehow, that makes him smile even more.
          
          Vihaan, 27, Punjabi by roots, Lucknow-wala by work, was all set to marry his childhood friend Shanaya, until Adah happened. Now, between flirty jabs, courtroom drama, hospital corridors, and family chaos, he's slowly realising...
          
          He doesn't just like annoying her.
          
          He's in love with her.
          
          A hate-love hurricane filled with sass, sparks, and scandal-this isn't just romance. It's war... with better outfits.
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/391561157?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=writer_sehherk

purple_scarsity

          
          
          
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          Hey dear ,
          Hope you are doing fine.
          Sorry dear for invading like this .
          
          Can you Please have look at my new book .
          
          THE QUEEN'S PAWN
          
          “She crowned him to protect her kingdom… not her heart.”
          
          - A substitute groom.
          - A grieving Queen.
          -A son with a throne too big for his tiny shoulders.
          - And a love that was never meant to happen…
          
          When 23-year-old Anay Sharma, a kindergarten teacher full of sunshine and stubbornness, is pulled into a world of palaces, politics, and power plays — he becomes the pawn in a royal game.
          
          But what happens when the pawn stops following the rules?
          
          Will Queen Alakhnanda Rivan Singh Devayan, cold, regal and burdened by loss, be able to resist the man who was supposed to be temporary?
          Will the young boy Riyansh, born into legacy and lies, find in Anay the father he never had?
          
          –Full of angst, slowburn, emotional twists, and modern royalty drama .
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/396091910?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=purple_scarsity

Dreamyflower_01

Hey how is my book the charm collector?? Like the tone of the book good or average any suggestions ? And how old are you ??? Like legal enough to read smut ???

Dreamyflower_01

Alright!! Got it !!!! I’ll better the conversation and add emotions !thanks for the input
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AlishaParwez

@Dreamyflower_01 legal enough to do the smut part you do not have to worry about . About the Charm collector , yup I feel its a good book , you have that writing that has made me want to read your stories at least once yes there are few small faults but that are way too small for people to miss . For me the tone of the book seems to be working right now . I would suggest you to work on the parts where the dialogues or the pov are in monologues and specially where they express themselves because as a readers perspective the words are not exactly showing how the characters are feeling in few of the scenes but overall it was a good read till now .
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