theApocalypse369

I write BLs, and this is my very first story. It's a  manga-style story. If it's okay with you, could you please review my work for me?
          
          Sorry for being a bother..
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/378474791?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=theApocalypse369