@Allaboutherstaly Hey friend, I am telling the truth, I don't have any knowledge of your language because I am an Indian writer, but I read your story by using humans' great invention AI, and it's truly a very good story, like this line that is in chapter 3:
He was in front of me. I gasped. I didn't even see how he got close. + He held my wrist tightly. "I told you..." His voice was weak but full of warning. "stay away from me
This line is proof that I am interested in your story. You should also read my Hinglish language story once by using translation, or at least vote for it so that other readers don't ignore me. In return for this favor, I will give you both a vote and a comment.