JamieSweet_1
Thank you for following! I hope you enjoy reading or skimming through my novels; The Luna Aldridge Series.
AlleyB255
JNightshade666
Hi Alley.
Realise it’s been a while and you might have even forgotten about me, but I felt like it was long overdue to reconnect.
How have you been?
AlleyB255
@JNightshade666 I haven't joined any so I'm not sure. Maybe you could search by keywords since their titles are often ABC book club or X review shop, and see if their creators are active.
JNightshade666
@AlleyB255 Thank you so much, looking forward to your feedback. Do you know how to join these review shops?
AlleyB255
@JNightshade666 my entry's "Reflected in shards". I think when I started following and interacting with other writers my views also raised so you could try it. I heard joining book clubs or review shops help too. Let me add your book to my reading list.
AlleyB255
Been inactive lately because of Lunar New Year, and because I’ve been refining my ONC entry’s structure. I’m afraid I’ll end up with a flashy style wrapped around a mediocre plot, or a decent plot buried under bad storytelling, or both, haha. I hope all the prompts turn into amazing novellas.
Here I am at chapter 3, with 8 more to go: https://www.wattpad.com/story/407454119
ShaliniChakraborty1
@AlleyB255, thank you for reading and reviewing it; your feedback means a lot to me.
ShaliniChakraborty1
@AlleyB255, I completely get the struggle! It can be challenging to strike a balance between style and narrative. I'm excited to see how your novella turns out; good luck.
BlueWhiskers1
Hi! Thanks for the follow! Letting u know i do promotions and r4rs so feel free to check my Clean Reads book ^^. Sorry to advertise hehe just thought u may wanna know
55hole
Hi! Would you want to do a v4v on my book Rain & Ruin? I’ll match your votes. Just tell me which story to return on!
MadisonCiabattari
I found your story The Last Messenger of the Hundred Tribes to be an amazing coming of age story and I love reading fantasy books. I hope you will continue to get more success on wattpad journey.
AlleyB255
@MadisonCiabattari Thank you so much. I hope you enjoy writing and reading here too. (♡´▽`♡)
AlleyB255
When Aaron opened his eyes again, he knew — just knew.
This was his final reality.
The seal BOH had placed on him was gone.
Before him stood the wreck he had once been. The vile thing that had groveled in the dirt. Years of pretending to be better peeled away, exposed as the shameless lie staring straight back at him.
“Isn’t it hilarious?”
The devourer at the edge of his existence stepped forward at last.
Balcony of Heaven Chapter 29: Destroyed https://www.wattpad.com/1605742493
ShaliniChakraborty1
@AlleyB255, This chapter sounds incredibly intense and powerful. The way Aaron faces his true self and the devourer stepping forward sets a gripping and dramatic tone. I’m eager to see how this pivotal moment unfolds and what it means for his journey. Great job building such suspense!
AlleyB255
Aaron stayed under the opening. Relief loosened something in his chest.
Then the world shifted.
The opening stretched, narrowed — became something else.
A well.
Deeper. Darker. Endless.
Cold wrapped around him. The same damp, numbing cold.
He fell.
Down.
And down.
Balcony of Heaven - Chapter 28: Corrupted beyond salvation https://www.wattpad.com/1604334277
ShaliniChakraborty1
@AlleyB255, This effectively captures a powerful and terrifying moment. The change from relief to plunging into darkness creates a great sense of tension and danger. I'm curious about what awaits Aaron at the bottom and how this fall will change everything. I can't wait to see what happens next in the story!
cosyleaf
Thank you for the follow. I hope you'll like my booklets ♡♡♡
Shesha__1123
Thank you following me ❤